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Between his legs, beyond the blinks and past the solid, fiery ball of pain, there's a dark head bending over him. Sweaty curls a curtain, fringed for crackling, crinkled eyes. Smile as toothy -- no, not quite, but then Spike has unfair advantages in that regard. But bright, white enough to afterglow against the redness of his eyelids when he closes them again. Indrawn air, and Spike can smell smartass on his breath before Xander gets the first word out.

"If you say 'like a glove' I'll be forced to pan your head in," Spike says without opening his eyes. The words his only threat, caught where he is, and weak with the pleasure of it. Weak threat, weak words, half whispered around the lump in his throat. As if Xander's hand is there too, not just pinning him in place, but choking off the lie that he doesn't want to be pinned here forever.

"No fair," Xander says, as if, as if. "You've got two free hands. I've just got this one." Warm against the inside of Spike's thigh, softly stroking. The other twists within him, giving the lie to no fair, or making it true.

As if with two hands free, Spike can... do more than he does now. Twist against, around, mouth 'liar' to him and know Xander sees it though Spike only sees stars.

"Am not. And I wasn't gonna say glove, anyway."

"Liar." With voice behind the word this time, and if it's fonder than it should be, well, there's only Xander here to hear it, and no one would believe him anyway. Liar, liar, liar.

"I wasn't. Mitten, maybe..."

Spike opens his eyes to glare, but there's nothing down between his legs that could see him and laugh back. Just dark hair, and a head bowed low to take him in. A hand, free, and one engulfed. A mouth as warm around him as the fingers within and wet and oh, no fair. No fair. No fair. Xander wears him like a glove, no lie, and no bloody fair at all.

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wesleysgirl

2003-03-09 02:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

Oh! Delicious, delicious, delicious!

This is wonderful.

*Loves all over you*

mpoetess

2003-03-09 05:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

yaysmooch! Thank you.

I really am 5 today. Sigh. ;-)

byrne

2003-03-09 02:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

bibble

uhn

mpoetess

2003-03-09 05:52 pm (UTC) (Link)

gubbiderble? Smuchimuchiness? Skeeeetz!

benaresq

2003-03-09 02:59 pm (UTC) (Link)

*is happily dead*

God, you're wonderful. This is wonderful. And makes me want to *bite* you in the light of your recent writerly self esteem issues. Become aware of the wonder that is you! Or else!

Yeah, OK, I'm jealous.
GAH.

mpoetess

2003-03-09 05:56 pm (UTC) (Link)

So, wait, if I don't become aware of the wonder that is me, you'll bite me? and this is supposed to be bad? *confused* *sad*

;-)

Thank you, love. (Of course this is the kind of tiny piece that even my writerly self esteem issues will admit that I'm capable of. It's things with multiple pages and plot that kick my mental ass.)

(Shut up. :-P )


giogio

2003-03-09 03:32 pm (UTC) (Link)

guh uhnnnn?

mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:03 pm (UTC) (Link)

uhnga ooer winkwink nudge nudge saynomore guddah og og?

(cave python)

snoopypez

2003-03-09 03:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

guh.

I don't think I can breathe.

GUH.

'smell of smartass on his breath'.. your writing always amazes me. Guh.

mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:36 pm (UTC) (Link)

:-D Thank you. Glad it made you go guh!

narcolepticcat

2003-03-09 04:10 pm (UTC) (Link)

uh huh. what they said. and more. lots more. more than more.

be with your writing honey. you rawk.

mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:38 pm (UTC) (Link)

Danke schon, otherjames. ;-)

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wolfling

2003-03-09 04:16 pm (UTC) (Link)

Wolfling does happy dance of new poetess fic

Lovely as usual!

mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:39 pm (UTC) (Link)

Is that like Z's clean laundry dance? Are there veils?

thankee

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mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:48 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you. Though... would now be the time to point out that I love Bedmice, and don't think that (for the the fun-fluff genre of story that it's intended to be) the characterisation is off at all? I really enjoy your writing.

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elfgirl

2003-03-09 05:11 pm (UTC) (Link)

I don't read much S/X, but I have to go with the guh! Yummy.

mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:53 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thanks!

saraslash

2003-03-09 05:23 pm (UTC) (Link)

Love, love. Wonderful! I'd love to see more. :)

mpoetess

2003-03-09 06:59 pm (UTC) (Link)

More? O.O I have to make more? I thought I fulfilled my writing quota for life this year this month um... today. ;-)

Thank you!

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zortified

2003-03-09 05:44 pm (UTC) (Link)

I was gonna say 'gauntlet'. But only because I already said 'bibble'.

mpoetess

2003-03-09 07:03 pm (UTC) (Link)

Gauntlet? With studs? Ouch!

:-P

cicirossi

2003-03-09 06:35 pm (UTC) (Link)

Mmmm. Lovely.

mpoetess

2003-03-09 07:04 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thankee!

~your fellow dork

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mpoetess

2003-03-09 07:09 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

faemovana

2003-03-09 07:05 pm (UTC) (Link)

ooooooooohhhhhh very very nice.

:D thanks!

mpoetess

2003-03-09 07:14 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

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mpoetess

2003-03-09 08:50 pm (UTC) (Link)

Smooch. Thank you.

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