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A dribble, a drabble -- below, please find babble...
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A drabble is 100 words. It just is. If it's 300 words long, or 500 words long, or 98 words long, the term you're looking for is "short story" or perhaps "ficlet" or "flashfic" but it is not "drabble." It's exactly like saying, "Well, I like the sound of the word 'sonnet' and it sort of seems like it should mean 'Any poem in iambic pentameter that rhymes,' so I'm going to use it that way."

People who say "Er, no, that's not a sonnet; it's a very nice poem, but it fails as a sonnet because it has too many lines," aren't being tightasses, they're just making a statement that what's been written here doesn't fall under the rules of that specific literary form. Nobody's saying it has to comply with a specific literary form, but if you don't want to be limited to the rules that have been established for that form, all you have to do is not call it that (or in the linked case, admit that it was an honest screwup). It's a problem that solves itself.

I think what bugs me about the way 'drabble' is being used recently in fandom to mean 'any really short story' or at best 'any short story of a pre-assigned round number of words' is that when done well, the 100-word drabble is a lot like a very carefully-crafted poem. I haven't regularly written poetry for years, but it was my first love and it's still the art-form I have the most formal study in, so I love drabbles that recapture that feeling (whether I wrote them or am reading them) of crafting and shaping where every. single. word. and its placement counts at a very intense level. Use of 'drabble' to mean any old short fic bothers me because I sense that the meaning-shift has come because the word sounds like "some little thing that dribbled out of my pen," and that association then attaches itself to the 100-word ones as well, that people have worked hard on to make meet the requirements of the form.

(And I'm not saying people didn't work hard on the 120-word stories and the 500-word stories; I'm just saying that they didn't specifically work hard to make a story that says something touching or clever and says it in exactly 100 words, no more, no less.)

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Edit: But then there's people who don't know the original meaning of 'drabble' because they've only seen it used in fandom, by someone else who learned it from someone else who... etc. I'm not bitching at them (or even really at the people who know the literary meaning and have tried to adapt it to different word counts) -- I'm just sort of bitching into the wind that this is what happens when word-meanings become more and more inclusive, moving from the specific to the general. We lose, as julia_here pointed out, meaning, in our quest for inclusiveness.

I like words.

My cat's breath smells like catfood.

chicken_cem

2004-12-11 09:21 pm (UTC) (Link)

Can I lick you and feed you some strawberries? OH MY GOD. You have said what I have been itching to say for months now.

When I started writing fanfic, I started with drabbles. 100 words, no more, no less. I wrote at least a dozen such drabbles, spaced out over months, and months, carefully thought out, not tossed off like a dribble. I did this because the first fanfic community I ran across after joing LJ was sunday100 (now called open_on_sunday), a slashy BtVS drabble community. The very NAME of the community has the '100' in it, so I took the definition to be exactly that.

Then, a few months ago I saw a zillion people on my friends list referring to three hundred-word things they had written as 'drabbles'. three hundred, five hundred, even, god, a thousand. I was very depressed about it, because it made all the work I did on the one hundred word ones seem wasted.

Thank you for speaking out against the dilution of an admirable form of writing.

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chicken_cem

2004-12-11 10:41 pm (UTC) (Link)

Yeah, it's like they (well, some of them) burpsd up an un-beta'ed summary of their longer fic, and it isn't even spell-checked. It makes me feel angry.

mpoetess

2004-12-11 09:34 pm (UTC) (Link)

Do not look up the page. Your wife is not licking chocolate off me. These are not the droids you're looking for.

chicken_cem

2004-12-11 10:42 pm (UTC) (Link)

Well, I'm not licking strawberry juice off you, either! Hmmmph! ;-)